What Developmental Feedback Includes

Overarching Plot  |  Character Development  |  Tone/ Voice  |  Word Choice

Dialogue  |  Scene Transitions  |  Chapter Layout  |  World Building

Genre Accuracy  |  The “Thrill Factor”  |  Action/  Physicality  |  Attention to Detail

Specific Line Examples  |  Coaching/ Advice for Revisions

Highlighting What’s Working Well  |  Capturing Grace/ Strength 

Poetic Verse  |  Concerns Specific To YOU

What to Expect:

     The length of my feedback varies depending on the length of the book, but it typically runs from 5 to 15 pages. Authors often come to the table with specific concerns regarding their manuscript, and I believe in addressing those concerns as well. Your path to revision will be clear because of receiving highly personalized feedback.  Any topic above that applies to your novel I’ll cover, and then some. After providing you with my feedback, I remain available for the following two weeks to answer any follow-up questions that may arise.  

Together, we can get you one step closer to being a published author.